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My thoughts on this process, this site and where I’m headed.

The Proverbial Can of Worms

So- May has not been a very productive month. I’ve only posted a handful of times- although I am really proud of a couple of them. (Did you read this one? I’m really happy with it.) It has just been a challenging month- mainly due to my day job. Finding the energy to write has been tough and as my relatively few postings show, most of the time I simply blew it off.

But- clearly I’ve tapped into my creative parts in this process and they are not interested in being shut away again for 20 years. I’ve been on edge and unsettled for most of the month. I’d be willing to bet that my wife would have voted me off the island this month if that was possible. The most content I’ve been all month has been when I was actively writing something or just after I’ve posted a new piece. Having started this process of self-transformation,  I think that I now need this creative outlet on a regular basis- hence the post’s title.

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A Peek at Story Blue!

Hi- still writing here and wanted to check in.

I’ve been trading emails with Matta for the last few days. I’d been sharing my thoughts about my writing and where my head is at. Matta’s been sharing similar glimpses of his comics and potential direction for them. During one of his emails, Matta sent a link to the website Letters of Note and, in particular, a letter from C.S. Lewis on the topic of writing itself. (Take a moment to check it out. Pretty interesting.)

I’ve been a fan of this website for awhile and had coincidentally also read that letter before the email exchange with Matta. It got me thinking about advice I’d read a few years ago from Robert Heinlein, one of my all-time favorite authors. Heinlein also wrote at length about the craft (and business) of writing. He articulated 5 rules for writing that seem pretty clear to me. They are:

1. You must write.
2. You must finish what you write.
3. You must refrain from rewriting, except to editorial order.
4. You must put the work on the market.
5. You must keep the work on the market until it is sold.

(This website credits Heinlein’s 1947 essay “On the Writing of Speculative Fiction.”)

These rules are posted just over the top of my monitor Heinlein's Rules for Writing and they truly provide direction for me. Sharing them got me thinking about Story Blue again. I started it in the middle of February and have more than 2400 words of story with another 600 or so words worth of notes for the story. Although a previous post discussed my thoughts on needing to develop the story’s main character more, apparently the story had enough time simmering in my unconscious mind to be ready for some more attention this morning. I woke up early and before 9 AM had added a few hundred more words (and a better visualization in my mind of the protagonist).

So in the spirit of Heinlein’s 4th rule, I posted the opening of Story Blue this morning. (Heinlein says to put the work on the market. I don’t know if I’m at a point to try to sell anything but I think posting on the blog is consistent with his direction.) Currently titled “The Third String”, it’s just a few hundred words but I think representative of the story. Please read, share, and comment. Thanks!

-T

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Some Thoughts About My Writing Style

I will admit to being rather particular about the technical aspects of my writing. Some thoughts:

I often place punctuation after the quotation marks. For some thoughts on this, check this website. I like the sentence, “In the United Kingdom, Canada, and islands under the influence of British education, punctuation around quotation marks is more apt to follow logic.” Clearly, I must have been influenced by some of my favorite British authors- Michael Moorcock, Douglas Adams, J.R.R. Tolkien, et al. The British style seems a little more logical to me.

I prefer the Oxford comma (also known as the serial comma).

Finally, I’m a fan of mythbusting in general. (Also, the TV show of the similar name and Snopes.) In that vein, please enjoy some grammar myths that I enjoy breaking. Check them out here. The article is written on a Legal Writing website but the arguments made are not limited to legal writing. Go ahead- break these “rules”. Live a little! 🙂

When I write, I hear myself telling a story. I think language should serve our message, not the other way around. Hopefully my writing style reads well by you, my dear audience!

Enjoy- and good writing!

 

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Checking In

Just a quick update- I did some writing today. Technically it was notes and thoughts for Story Orange. I’m going to count it though.

As I pointed out in my last post, I think I’m pretty solid at coming up with interesting and creative premises. I’d say that I rock the “elevator speech”. (In an alternate world, I’m a movie producer now sending someone to go write the story that I just created.)

I am OK with this. (For now.) In my mind, I have the gross mechanics down. I have a embraced the vulnerability inherent in creativity. I have a method of tracking my progress (you’re reading it). I am building the habit of this new activity. This all seems to be progressing nicely.

So, if I happen to be at a point that requires the consideration of nuances, I’ll take that as progress. I would assume that the learning curve for this self-transformation must appear differently at various points in the curve. This must be how it looks at this point.

I’m curious- if anyone is in a similar process of self-transformation or has been through such a transformation in the past, how did you recognize changes in the process? Did your strategy change? Please- read and SHARE!

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Houston, We Have a Problem…

I’m stuck working on Story Blue. I figured out why I’m stuck, though.

I have what I think is an interesting and potentially entertaining idea for the story. I have established the tone that I want. I have an outline roughed out. But- the story is stuck at a little under 2000 words. It has failed to progress. Until now I wasn’t quite sure why.

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